Проверте пожалуйста текст на наличие ошибок, может быть слова не так

Проверте пожалуйста текст на наличие ошибок, может быть слова не так записаны, а может вообще поменять необходимо.
I would like to say a few words about my great-grandmother . Her name Nadeeva Fedosya Egorovna . She was born May 29, 1915 in Mordovia. She worked as an elementary school teacher . Her family had 6 brothers and 2 sisters , 5 brothers and elder nephew died in the Great Patriotic War. These events affected the history of her family and our too. And I know that it is not moved from place to place . She moved to Omsk in 1938, because in Mordovia was a great drought , 5 years nothing would grow . It was the first and last crossing . Unfortunately we have no family legends , but I'm happy that I could share with you at least something .

Тамара Мараихина 2019-08-10 00:36:38

These events affected the history of her family and ourS too.

Милана Семерникова 2019-08-10 00:42:24

And I know that a family didn't move from place to place

Вика Дод 2019-08-10 00:50:35

It (поэтому что семья не she) moved to Omsk in 1938

Ангелина Семинаристова 2019-08-10 00:53:15

because there was a great drought in Mordovia

Кухлиева Агата 2019-08-10 01:02:51

for 5 years nothing had been grown

Илья Скабарыхин 2019-08-10 01:04:23

It was the first and last their resettlement (может быть, moving, но не crossing - это поближе к перекрестку либо пересечению (дороги)