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Now I want to tell you about my favorite places where I like to spend my free time. It's my native city Volgograd. Its the most beautiful city I have ever seen. I really enjoy the Museum - panorama, where a guide tells everybody about Stalingrad Battle. It is very interesting and unforgettable. It's my first favorite place.  Besides, I like riding a boat along the great Russian river the Volga. There is a famous Mamaev Kurgan and a beautiful embankment in Volgograd.  Secondly, an amazing embankment is the place where I can walk again and again. It is worth visiting.
Where do I like do shopping?  Well, there are a few open-air markets in our town. Sometimes I go to this market. It takes a very large territory on the outskirts of the city. I love to go there, because you can buy any goods you need there. Market sells children's and adult's clothes, shoes until all ages and seasons, toys and household appliances, books and magazines, printers and computers. Prices at this market are much smaller than in the shops in the center of the city. I like spending time with my friends there. It's fun and interesting.