Благой вечер. Помогите пожалуйста с сочинением на британском языке про NY

что обязано быть в сочинении?

Описание того, как ты провел 2 денька в NY. т.е. куда ходил, что лицезрел. Буду очень признательна :)

I want to tell you about my adventure! There was excellent! At first I went to our hotel, it was on the city center.
N.Y is the center of model business, there are many shops there. At firs I wet to the famous shops! I bought there many clothes.
Then I went to the restaurant with my friends. It was tasty)
After that we went to the famous museum, there were house of wax! It looks really) I like it very much)