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Hello my name is _____ ? I want to tell you about "My fauvorite cartoon "

My favorite cartoon is " Boss Milksucker ". Their family is friendly and cheerful .The boss himself, he is cunning , but with a good heart , he's got blond hair and green eyes and he wears a suit with a briefcase .Tim ,he wasn't happy at first, but then he missed his Boss . He has blue eyes like his mother and dark hair like his father. Mom and dad are Ted and Janice . They are very kind character. They're tall and thin . The hair is brown and always tidy . I love this cartoon. I suggest you watch it!

Мы тоже писали этот текст , я тогда написала про пони и мне поставили 5

Dad and mom are very kind. They love each other and their children too. The little baby can talk, it's very strange. And the son who is older than the baby does not love the baby, but by his nature he is good and kind and loves his parents.

Вот и всё!)))