Проверьте текст по британскому...Many people believe that the future will be

Проверьте текст по британскому...
Many people believe that the future will be bright, but not all people think so. Let's have a closer look at this.
A lot of people believe, that the future will be better. The scientific and technological revolution will develop faster on our planet. The wars between the countries will stop, and the peace between the different nations will come to the world. The parks will be built instead of the factories, and a lot of new forests will be planted. The air on our planet will become cleaner and fresher. Our planet will become cleaner if people protect the environment.
Also a lot of people expect, that our life in the future will be worse. The science is moving very far away, so the robots will take over the world. Every year there will be more wars, so people will die. The parks will not exist, because the arms factories will be everywhere. People will wear masks, because the planet will very dirty.
Each person chooses their own future. We do not know what will happen after many years. If we want that the future will be bright, we will need to store and protect our planet.

Антонина Сабакинских 2019-08-30 18:13:18

в целом

Юлия Латко 2019-08-30 18:20:51

употребление the

Степан 2019-08-30 18:23:05

Ok

Коля Лаженицын 2019-08-30 18:30:03

Да либо нет?

Альбина Сендерик 2019-08-30 18:33:09

надобно проверить и на грамматику и на употребление слов, выражений и артиклей

Валерка Хаид 2019-08-30 18:35:25

молодец!!!условные предложения правильные!!!!артикль the на собственных местах. но я бы перед future его не ставила.еще раз разговариваю well done!!

Сергей Чуленко 2019-08-30 18:36:27

Приобщаюсь про: the future, почему решили с ним поставить?

Маргарита Калюгина 2019-08-30 18:37:26

A lot of people believe, that the future will be better. Занятая перед that не нужна

Говердова Наталья 2019-08-30 18:45:22

Also a lot of people expect, that our life in the future will be worse. Аналогично про запятую

Инна Шулевич 2019-08-30 18:52:07

Заместо the science is moving very far away, - британцы не обожают так сказать, потому the science is greatly advancing,