Какие тут есть ошибки? И какие сюда можно добавить четыре предложения?In

Какие тут есть оплошности?
И какие сюда можно добавить четыре предложения?
In my free time i prefer reading books and watching movies. Therefore my favourite film is "The Hobbit". This film was shooted by Peter Jackdon. Peter мейд it according to the book "The Hobbit or There and Back Again". This film is about one usual Hobbit who liked to stay at home. However, thirst for adventures мейд him to be brave and help his friends.
One day a group of gnomes asked the main hero to help them to save their kingdom in the mountain, because hobbits were famous as the most quit and most slick in the world. Firstly, the Hobbit did not want to help them because he was a coward and did not like leave his cosy house, but then he changed his mind and went hiking with gnomes.
I like this film because it is very interesting and breathtaken. I can watch it again and again.