Проверьте текст по английскому . Особенно грамматику (времена).It was a magic

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It was a magic day at school. Happy children were running around the school. Dasha and me had went to house before lessens ended.
When we were coming at home, Dasha and me saw that our TV itself included. I was calling my mother while Dasha turned off the TV, but he not turned off. We thought it would мейд a gosts.
My mom had been riding in home 2 hours so she was tired. My mother sanded that it's not hosts.We have very oldest TV, and he very bad work.
Dasha and me were laughing all day because it was very funny.
Пожаааалуйста,проверьте. Безотлагательно надобно. 8-й класс.