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The last time we traveled in Murmansk. I was there in winter, in February. On the trip with me was my dad . I saw one tourist attraction of Murmansk - a monument to Alyosha. The weather was overcast the whole sky was covered with clouds and it was raining. We went to Murmansk to the dentist. I was in the water Park . There was a lot of fun. I went to see my friend Denis and his aunt Nina. I especially liked the fact that I finally saw my best friend Denis. there was only one drawback from our trip. the weather was bad.