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My best friend is Andrey. We've friends since chilhood because we are cousins. He lives 100 meters away from me.
Andrey is slim because he doesn't like to eat a lot and loves to ride a bike. He has funny face and protruding(торчащие) ears. His clothes always are thin. Andreyusually shy, but sometimes he's naughty and laughs out loud.
His hobbies are drawing tanks and making tank models from LEGO. Also he likes to play online war game on computer.
We get on(ладим) with him. I spend many good times with Andrey. Sometimes after school, we go to his house. I can eaasily share secrets with him, because he doesn't tell them to anyone.