Проверьте эссе пожалуйста! I have been always curious to study.

Проверьте эссе пожалуйста!
I have been always curious to study. Especially I was attracted by studying forein languages, meeting with culture and traditions of other nations. Exactly knowledge of English helped me in getting good practice and speaking expirience in England. Further I got a dream to gain much more expirience traveling to other countries. Participation to "Sakura" program became my main goal when I knew about it.

Our goverment with Elbasy at the head, represents many opportunities of getting comprehensive education. One of them is taking part in international forums and olimpiads. Republic science practical center "Daryn", which constantly informs state educational institutions about upcoming education events, recently introduced our school about "Sakura" program, which helds in capital of Japan Tokyo.

I was very happy to this offer, it would be a very big step toward to my dream after all. Visting Japan and participating to this forum I am subsequently going to take whole knowleges and to present Kazakhstan with its scientific potential. I am very proud to opportunity to be the one who will present the latest educational achievement of Kazakhstan on international science arena. Of course I also was attracted by opportunity of visiting Japan - land of the rising sun, of delighting the beauty of unusual eatsred county, admiring local attractions, meeting closer to culture and traditions of Japan nation. And of course to enjoy the estern kitchen.


Taking part to whis event would give me ability to improve my language knoledges and to transfer collected expirience to advanced youth which I belong to. I see my self as Sales Manager in the future, where I would easly use all collected expirience and speaking skills in Japan. Future of Kazakhstan depends on my generation: expansion of advanced educational experience, improving scientific technologies and the strengthening of international relations. This kind of events open many potentials to Kazakhstan in displaying creative skills and implementation of scientific practice, exchanging expirience and strengthening relations between countries, put new ambition goals in front of youth generations.


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I would really like to visit "Sakura" Program, to bring benefit to my fatherland and to approach closer to my dream. We if we are 20% of our population, we are 100% of our future.