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Disney land is very fun I really like it there,there are a lot of people.Disneyland is a world where you become a child. Every cartoon from your childhood is close to хэнд. The most famous Disneyland is situated in France, Paris. You can do a lot of things in Disneyland. You can go sightseeing because there are so many beautiful places - castles, for example. Moreover you can have a great time on the attractions. Furthermore, there is a souvenir shop where you can buy a lot of disney things : toys, hats, bags etc.норамально?