Пожалуйста помагите с ангилйскис не дружу!!!!!Write the story again making

Пожалуйста помагите с ангилйскис не дружу!!!!!Write the story again making it more colourful.
Last summer Kate went to Britain
Last summer Kate went to Britain as a tourist.She visited some cities,saw some rivers and mountains.She enjoyed those parts of the UK.When Kate came to London,she understood she lovedd the city very much.She spent four days there and visite some places of interest.She enjoyed the parks of London too