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A short  life  story 

One day one man named Pavel decided to remodel his bike to make it more comfortable. He  had been fixing the bike since the early morning and his mother decided to bring him some food. She came to the garage and saw a terrible picture. Pavel was trying to join two parts of his bike.  He was red and was standing in a very strange position. His mother was very kind. She had never interfered with his problems  before so she didn't say anything ans went away. In the evening she looked out the window and saw how Pavel was trying to ride his new bike. He travelled two metres and his bike broke into some pieces. Pavel was very angry. His mother pulled the curtains and coudn't stop laughing. 

Yesterday was a busy day for me.In the morning I didn't watch TV and I didn't listen to music.I helped my mum and dad with the housework.I tidied my room and I cleaned the bathroom.Then it was time to go shopping!We wanted to take the bus to the shops,but the bus didn't stop for us. So we walked all the way to the shops!We shopped for two hours.On the way home,I carried a heavy shopping bag.We didn't walk back home.This time we didn't miss the bus!We arrived back home at four o'clock.I was very tired.What a day!

Вчера был напряженный денек для меня.С утра я не смотрел телевизор и не слушал музыку.Я подсобляла родителям по хозяйству.Я убралась в своей комнате и убралась в ванной.Тогда пришло время ходить по магазинам!Мы желали сесть на автобус до магазинов,но автобус не тормознул для нас. Так мы прошли весь путь до магазинов!Мы делали покупки в течение 2-ух часов.По дороге домой я нес тяжелую хозяйственную сумку.Мы не вернулись домой пешком.На этот раз мы не запоздали на автобус!Мы возвратились домой в четыре часа.Я была очень вялой.Что за денек!