мн твр на тему:People are not loyal and there is too

Nowadays people are too cruel, maybe not all of them but most of our planet. We are interested only what happening with us, we dont look at others. If we didnt like something, we start shouting, we start to be aggressive. we dont take into account the circumstances, we can yell at a person who is older than us. We dont respect others.
Its a big problem with which we dont want to deal with. We dont think at all about emotions, we think about our wants. We all just want now and there.
It's scary to walk down the street and think that someone is will screaming on you or will attack you for his purposes.
I think we must be more loyal, better and understand not only in relation to themselves, but also to others. We must try to solve the problems without shouting and aggressive behavior. We must change our attitude to live. First think and than do. Take life easier.

Я старалась, не знаю подойдёт ли он для тебя и в таком стиле необходимо ли и нету ли там ошибок, полагаюсь все превосходно