Помогите очень нужно ! Номер 11

Ну в общем гляди. Я брала отрывок из текста "The Last Leave" и выполнила задание.(отрывок очень большой вышел, более 120 слов). Но в ответах на вопросы я уверенна, я перестроила их. Так что лови)
Many artists lived in the Greenwich Village area of New York. Two young women named Sue and Johnsy shared a studio apartment at the top of a three-story building. Johnsys real name was Joanna.

In November, a cold, unseen stranger came to visit the city. This disease, pneumonia, killed many people. Johnsy lay on her bed, hardly moving. She looked through the small window. She could see the side of the brick house next to her building.

One morning, a doctor examined Johnsy and took her temperature. Then he spoke with Sue in another room.

She has one chance in  let us say ten, he said. And that chance is for her to want to live. Your friend has мейд up her mind that she is not going to get well. Has she anything on her mind?

She she wanted to paint the Bay of Naples in Italy some day, said Sue.

Paint? said the doctor. Bosh! Has she anything on her mind worth thinking twice  a man for example?

A man? said Sue. Is a man worth but, no, doctor; there is nothing of the kind.

I will do all that science can do, said the doctor. But whenever my patient begins to count the carriages at her funeral, I take away fifty percent from the curative power of medicines.

After the doctor had gone, Sue went into the workroom and cried. Then she went to Johnsys room with her drawing board, whistling ragtime. ...
1)The main characters of this story are Johnsy and Sue
2)They are lived in the Greenwich Village area of New York
3) Johnsy was an artist and Sue was an actress
4) Jonesy is sick, Sue is very worried about her and enters her room.
5)Yes it enters
6)Yes, there is a corresponding punctuation.