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Dear Rachel,

I am sorry you got ill.

You should drink more water and hot drink, take medicine and stay in bed.

You should eat an ice cream, go to school or walk with friends.

I hope well meet soon.

Love,

Julia

dear ivan

i am sorry you teei ill

you should stay in bed and drink a lot of water!you should eat a lot of vegetabels! you are good for you.

you should not go to school and you should not play outside! it is very cold.

i hope you feel better soon!

Love

Michel.