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I close my eyes and imagine that there is a fairy tale around me, I am among the sparkling crystals, in a crystal cave. Im wearing a suit and a respirator, they dont save me from a terrible cold and high humidity. Having descended 1,000 feet, I find myself getting closer to the center of the earth, and the giant crystals are striking in their grandeur. Sunlight does not penetrate into the cave, but there is no discomfort, the whole cave shines as if large crystal chandeliers illuminate the ballroom. I am amazed at the scale of the cave itself, as well as the fascinating history of education that the guide introduces us to.
Although I actually was not in the Crystal Cave, I tried to imagine as realistic as possible.