Which of the above tips has been ignored in the sentences

Which of the above tips has been ignored in the sentences below? Rephrase the statements in a way that is more positive. 1 quot;You play the violin really loudly to stop me sleeping.quot; 2 You deliberately switch on your electric drill every night. It gets on my nerves.quot; 3 You walk your dog without a leash to frighten my daughter. 4 You are always hanging your wet carpet on the balcony to make my windows dirty.quot;

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Every time tip 4 is ignored. These sentences sound too personal and accusatory because
the personal pronoun you is used at the beginning of each sentence.

It would be better to express the same ideas in the following way:

1 I cant sleep when somebody plays the violin so loudly.

2 The sound of an electric drill causes problems with my sleep.

3 I think dogs should be walked on a leash so that other people wont be frightened.

4 My windows get dirty when you hang your wet carpet on the balcony.

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