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Проверьте текст, если есть оплошности, то прошу вас исправить их) I want to be a soldier. It is a family profession. In order to become a military need to enroll in a military school. In order to do that would neobhodimoimet fit and good knowledge. I love this profession because it is very responsible, and it is highly paid