Проверьте пожалуйста текст на грамматикуMore and more people nowadays prefer watching

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More and more people nowadays prefer watching DVDs at home to going to the cinema. What are the pros and cons of watching DVDs?
People who watch movie at home are more comfortable. Contrary to the fact that you have to book the ticket in advance in order to have a better position, there is no need for people at home to worry about the ticket. They can enjoy movie at any time they want, and at any position they like. There is the possibility that they can watch movie at midnight or at six oclock in the morning. What s more, people who prefer watching movie at home wouldnt have to face any traffic problem. No people want to spend the same time on the way they go to the cinema and watching movie.

I would rather watch a movie at the cinema because in the cinema they have a really good stereo so you can really enjoy the movie. Of course, watching a movie on DVD is good because you can relax at home but I would choose to spend the money and go to the cinema and have a really good time.

Esenija Slesarchuk 2019-01-21 22:20:34

People who watch movie at home are more comfortable. наверно не люди комфортны, чувствуют они себя более комфортно "People who watch movie at home feel more comfortable". В других предложениях ошибок не отыскал