Помогите написать соченение which is the most attractive holiday explain why

1.I would like to visit Stratford-upon-Avon for many reasons. 2.First of all, it's common knowledge that this town is known as the birthplace of one of the greatest poets of William Shakespeare .3. Secondly this town is also famous for its history, different historical buildings that exist today. 4.Nevertheless, Stratford -upon-Avon is a very beautiful town. 5.It looks very appealing to me. It will be so wonderful to see all this beauty and to know more about its culture , history, traditions in real.6. So, if I had the chance to visit this place I would be very happy.(сколько смогла сорри)