Проверьте пожалуйста оплошности,зарание огромное спасибо

Проверьте пожалуйста оплошности,зарание громадное спасибо Hello, Nastya, I noticed that now half of Russia do not read magazines and interesting magazines for different age categories for example: with 5 to 9 years of age there is a magazine, a hilarious entertainer, there's stories, poems, with 9 to 13 is an example of how magazine, Science empirically, for teens Club is a wonderful magazine, seventeen, or as a boomerang,. For those who have 20-30 is logged as Lisa useful magazine, there are tips for the care of the body. Nastya and you which magazines you read most