помгите, необходимо написать про свою любимую знаменитую личность. 5 класс

Моя возлюбленная известная личность - Джонни Депп. Он актёр в различных фильмах. Впервые я увидел его в Пиратах Карибского Моря когда мне было 10 лет и я глядел телевизор. После этого я поглядел вторую часть этого фильма и я был очень впечатлён. Я стал его поклонником и нашел что у него уже было огромное количество потрясающих работ. К примеру он сыграл Безумного Шляпника в "Алиса в стране чудес",  я видел его в "Чарли и Шоколадная фабрика". Позднее один друг сказал мне что он также даёт голоса персонажам мультов - Виктор в "Труп Жены". Я не понимаю, почему у него всё еще нет Оскаров. Я вправду очень его люблю и не могу дождаться новых фильмов.

My favourite famous person is Johnny Depp. He is an actor in different movies. First time I saw him in Pirates of the Caribbean when I was ten years old and I watched TV. After that I watched a second part of this film and I was really impressed. I became his fan and I discovered that he already had a lot of cool works in famous films. For example he played The Mad Hatter in "Alice in wonderland", I saw him in "Charlie and the Chocolate Factory". Later one friend told me that he's also giving his voice to cartoon characters - Victor in "Corpse Bride". I don't understand why he still has no "Oscars". I really love him and I can't wait for his new films. 

My favourite actor
One of the great actors who мейд a strong impression on me is Will Smith. I think he is a brilliant actor with a lot of talents. All his characters are bright individuals and Will plays them perfectly well. Today he is called one of the most powerful actors in Hollywood. He has been nominated for Golden Globe awards and Academy awards for his starring roles in action films, science fiction films, comedies and dramas. By the way Will is also a rap singer and his musical career is quite successful too. He has earned four Grammy awards in music.

Smith was born in 1968 in West Philadelphia. He began his acting career in 1993 with a major role in the drama Six Degrees of Separation. And after that Will Smith has starred in such massive blockbuster films as Men in Black, I am Legend, Independence Day, I, Robot, Hancock, Seven Pounds and After Earth. He has played plenty of interesting roles, and two of them he has done together with his son Jaden.

To my mind Will is the most fascinating actor and producer. I can watch his movies lots of times and every time I really enjoy his acting. He can be funny and serious, cold and sensitive. And I cannot wait for his new masterpieces because he always tries something new.
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