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7. When I was a child, I viewed things from a much lower height. Many physical objects around me appeared very large. When I wanted to move something, I needed some help.
8. I intend to go back home when I finish my education.
9. The phone rang while I was doing the dishes. I dried my hands and answered it. When I heard my husband's voice, I was very happy.
10. I have been in the United States for the last four months. During this time, I have done many things and seen many places.
11. When the old man started to walk back to his cave, the sun had already hidden itself behind the mountain.
12. While I was writing my composition last night, someone knocked on the door.
13. I study English at an English conversation school two times a week.
14. Getting accustomed to a different culture is not easy.
15. I'm really glad to visit my hometown this year.
16. While I was visitting my cousin in Los Angeles, we went to a restaurant and ate Thai food.
17. We ate dinner and watched TV after it.
18. When I was in my country, I was afraid to come to the United States. I thought I couldn't walk out at night because of the terrible crimes. But now I have a different opinion. I have lived in this small town for three months and learnt that there is very little crime here.
19. Before I came to the United State, I pictured the U.S. as an exciting place with honest, hard-working, well-mannered people. After I came to the United State four months ago the picture changed. The manners of the students while they are in the cafeteria are really bad. I also think that office workers here are lazy. People in my country work a lot harder.