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I want to tell you about one of the Russian holidays about Maslenitca. It comes at the end of February at the beginning of March. On this holiday people cook pancakes, dance folk dances, sing folk songs and burn a scarecrow. In Russian cities you can find many areas there celebrate this holidays. There's you can find many entertainment and restaurants there you can taste many different pancakes. This holiday celebrate in all the organizations of Russia. For example in the school there I studied was competition between classes. Each class prepares a dance or a song and each pupil brings pancakes, jam or other sauce. Class decorate the table with pancakes, show performance. After that determine the winners. And everyone starts to dance and eat pancakes. This is very cheerful holiday.

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about Maslenitsa. It comes at the end of February or at the beginning of March.

In Russia this holiday is celebrated almost everywhere. (заместо предложения In Russian cities  you can find many areas ..........this holiday.) You can find many entertainments and restaurants where you can taste a lot of different pancakes. This holiday  we celebrate in all the organizations in our country.

For example,  There was a competition between classes at my  school.  Not sauce ( Лучше other dishes)  Not class ( better Our pupils decorate or lay the table with pancakes ... Then we show the performance. Два предпоследних предложения убрать.) It was a pleasure to eat pancakes and to talk with each other. It is a very cheerful holiday and I really like it.

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