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My future profession doctor
Now Im in the 10th grade, and soon I will have to choose where to study later. There are many noble and respected professions in the world, but I want to be a doctor. In the another city there is a medical university, so I can continue my education there.I just need to choose the right branch of the numerous branches. In order to become a qualified physician, I have to study for about 6 years. After I graduated, I have the right to work in the hospital. I hope to succeed in the field of medicine, as it is my favorite profession. I have relatives who work as doctors: everyone has a own specialty. I see how hard they work to help people and heal them from various diseases. I understand that we need certain qualities to the profession, such as love for people, responsibility, patience, and an inquisitive mind, etc. I also need to learn, especially in certain areas, such as biology, chemistry, Latin and even math. But Im not afraid of any difficulties, and I am ready to do my best. I would like to work with people to help them recover, to diagnose certain diseases and assign the appropriate preparations. My parents support my decision to become a doctor. They have no doubt that this is the right decision for me.

Стефания Колбасовв 2019-02-20 16:13:32

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