Проверьте сочинение на британском если есть оплошности пришлите текст исправленным. Заблаговременно

Проверьте сочинение на британском если есть оплошности пришлите текст исправленным. Заблаговременно спасибо.

The town of my dreams is called Sutton-Colfield. I live there for 5 years. In my town there are two-storeyed buildings with balconies and cottages with chimneys. In my town there is no Skyscrapers, the tallest building in my town is an old castle, it is located in the center of the city and serves as a museum. In my town very wide streets and there are no roads because the city is small .In my town there is no hotel, because citizens are very hospitable Also in my town there is a town hall, small shops and a pizzeria in which all townspeople gather on holidays. The town is surrounded by picturesque meadows on which sheep graze. In my town there are no plants but outside it there are windmills and solar batteries.

I like to live in my city because there is no fuss in it like in big cities. Rarely it's lonely but friendly townspeople will always support you.

Sometimes I would go out of town to visit other cities and countries. I think it's boring to stay in one place

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*there are no skyscrapers - тк множественные число
*in my town there are very wide streets
*lonely в предпоследнем - Не очень корректно
скорее, filled with loneliness
*town WHERE people will always support you
* в заключительном предложении just in one place
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