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My favorite city is Seoul.
Seoul is the capital of South Korea.
The city of Seoul is very beautiful. Very bright and Cheerful. Korea I have been fond of for 2 years. I was attracted to this hobby by their terrain. Seoul is a bit similar in the situation with the city of Busan. This is also in South Korea.
In the center of Seoul is Mount Namsan. On it there is a TV Tower "N Tower", or as after the correction of the tower in 2005. She was nicknamed "N Seoul Tower". "N" stands for "New"
N Seoul Tower-symbol of Seoul. This is a favorite place for every citizen or tourist who came there.
Koreans are very hardworking and hardworking people. "If set a goal, go and achieve it" is the motto of all of South Korea.
I addition to the television tower, there are attractions such as Gyeongbokkun - the largest of the five large palaces built during the Joseon era., Chong-changhon Creek, it flows all over the center of Seoul., Etc.
In many places of Seoul fountains are beaten, the banks are lined with beautiful tiles and stones. Water creates a cool microclimate in the deepening of the channel, which is especially pleasant in the summer heat.
I have a dream-visit there. I will try to translate this dream into reality.