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I love to travel. Travelling gives us a good chance to see foreign countries, experience their culture, visit many great and famous places and to meet interesting people. Probably will not find a man, who would not like travelling. It's so interesting, as if you are immersed in another world where everyone speaks a different language, are unfamiliar to us clothes, and even think differently. I've always wanted to travel, and that's true! During the summer holidays I went to the Sunny city of Tashkent . We arrived late in the night, and from the window of the plane could enjoy the view of the night Tashkent. Upon arrival at the airport, we were met by a guide who accompanied us to the hotel. The rooms were very cozy, and the service was just great. We were very tired after a long flight, so the first thing decided a good night's sleep. Within a few days, we visited most of the sights of the city. Everything was wonderful: we ate in restaurants, tried food and drinks, walked around the shops. We walk in the Park. Like all good things, our holiday came to an end. On the way home, everyone was pleasantly tired. I'm really glad that I had the opportunity to visit this wonderful city .

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I love travel. Travel gives us a good chance to see foreign countries, experience their culture, visit many great and famous places and meet interesting people. Probably, can not find a man, who would not like travelling. It's so interesting, as if you are immersed in another world where everyone speaks in different language, are unfamiliar to us clothes, and even think differently. I've always wanted to travel, and that's true! During the summer holidays I went to the Sunny city of Tashkent . We arrived late in the night, and from the window of the plane could enjoy the view of the night Tashkent. Upon arrival at the airport, we were met by a guide who accompanied us to the hotel. The rooms were very cozy, and the service was great. We were very tired after a long flight, so the first thing decided a good night sleep. Within a few days, we visited most of the sights of the city. Everything was wonderful: we ate in restaurants, tried food and drinks, walked around the shops. We walk in the Park. Like all good things, our holiday came to an end. On the way home, everyone was pleasantly tired. I'm really glad that I had the opportunity to visit this wonderful city .
Андрей Чуменков
our holiday finished* поправила всё, что смогла
Вроде все хорошо. но вот 1-ое предложение кажется там не love а like
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