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I'm going to give a talk about my summer holidays.
From the very begging I should say, that summer is my favorite season.
Well, summer is a season, when you have got a lot of free time and you can do anything you want.
So, i spent my time with my friends. We walked in different beautiful parks, do different activities together, went to the beach. Then, I visited my sister. It was a great time.
To sum up I should say, that I've got plans to the next summer, I think, it will be amazing

I would like to tell about my summer holidays.
Summer is a beautiful season with the long sunny days and short warm nights. This summer is cold and rainy that's why I can't do all my plans. First of all I spent a lot of time with my friends. We prefer go to the Cafe and sinema . Than I have helped my sister. I spent all free time with sister's children. I prefer this summer.