Помогите, кто может. Дочке задали извещенье по англисскому языку на тему

Look!  There are a lot of people in the park today! Its Sunday. The weather is fine and the sun is shining. It is very warm. Look! Jim is playing a game with a clown! Many bоуs are riding their bikes. Some girls are talking and eating ice-cream. An old lady is walking out a dog. Some boys are playing ball. A man is taking pictures of his family in the park. There are a lot of people on the pond. Some of them are boating and some are feeding birds. You can see people having a rest under the trees or sitting on benches and talking or listening to music.Everybody is having a great time! Как-то так если че переделаю