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Dear Kate,

Thank you for your letter! This activities at school are really cool. I think that charity is so important Nowadays. In my school I have charity activities too. For example, we go to a local hispital to present to sick peaple some things which were done by our hands. Else we play with orphans in children's home. What about a charity concerts? We have never done it but we want to do it. We already have some ideas for realizing it soon! if we already had a charity concert, then I would give the money I received to the animal shelter. What do you think about helping animals in animals shelters?
Write me soon.

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