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The Importance to Being Polite
---------------------------------------------------------- Politeness costs nothing, but yields much.
---------------------------------------------------------- English proverb

Is it important to be polite? I think that it is very very important!

What is to be polite? Well, even when you greet somebody it is polite deed. Or when you give presents to friends, do housework, always say Thanks, Please and You are welcome This list can be infinite.

Have you ever thought, what will, if everybody will rude each other? It will lead to chaos in whole community. For example: every people doesnt follow rules of decorum, everybody is swear and not control oneself. How do you think, will it be pleasant to live in such a non-cultural society? Obviously not. Thats why every people must be always polite!

Can I call myself a polite person? Probably yes. I always polite with everyone, who I meet. Example for me, of course, my parents and teachers, maybe some friends.

If youre polite the whole world is in your hands!