Сократите текс из пожалуйста я вас упрашиваю молю просто пожалууууууствааааааааJenny was

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Jenny was excited she was eagerly waiting for her vacation in the Swiss Alps and now she was finally here. There were many interesting people in her group and the leader seemed skilled, Janie could not believe her luck
she was finally in the distance from the city
Everyone was struck by the scenery on the first walk, The mountains were covered with snow and peeking out
against the blue sky and the air was so fresh, There were always wild wild flowers, Jenny stopped to take a couple
of pictures, But she looked around and all gone, she realized she was alone



After a while, Jenie walked along the path and she suddenly saw that the path was divided into two and she did not
know which way to go. She decided to walk along the right path. After a while, there was a noise and the ground fell,
She crouched as she felt that she was falling down , mountains, but she cried for the bushes that were on her way, She
screamed as loud as possible, but someone to help did not come
Then when she ran out of strength she felt like she was rescued by two strong hands, To happiness, the team leaders
quickly realized that she was missing and returned behind her, Jenny felt very relieved that they found her on time

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Jenny  was eagerly waiting for her vacation in the Swiss Alps and now she was finally here.   There were many interesting people in her group and the leader seemed skilled, Jenny could not believe her luck. 
  She was finally in the distance from the city
   Everyone was struck by the scenery on the first walk, The mountains were covered with snow. There was a the blue sky and the air was so fresh, There were always wild wild flowers, Jenny stopped to take a couple
 of pictures, But she looked around and all gone, she realized she was alone



   After a while, Jenie walked along the path and she suddenly saw that the path was divided into two and she did not
 know which way to go. She decided to walk along the right path. After a while, there was a noise and the ground fell, 
She crouched as she felt that she was falling down , mountains, but she cried for the bushes that were on her way, She 
screamed as loud as possible, but someone to help did not come
 Then when she ran out of strength she felt like she was rescued by two strong hands, To happiness, the team leaders 
quickly realized that she was missing and returned behind her, Jenny felt very relieved that they found her on time
Лебенко Юлия
уменьшить очень не вышло, в начале немножко упростила, остальное - важно. Что-то уберешь - пропадает смысл
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