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My best day of the year is -saturday.
Because on Saturday I can relax. We always go swimming in the pool at Saturday. After it we always go to the cafe. Mom always orders me :a cake,an apples,and a cup of tea.
I love this day very much!

 My best day of the year !
   I like dog . I play with dog . He*s name is Tom . Once I came out on the street with Tom . And we immediately went to the stor ! Tom like steak . Then I buy
steak Tom . He had breakfast . And we went  further .
  We walked around the city and at 6 o*clock we went to the playground.
                                                                       It was the best day of the year!
                                                                             Tom and George .