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My name is Sabir Latypov and I'll tell you about my usual working day.
In our life we have weekends and holidays. Of course, its more pleasant to speak about holidays than about workdays. But these workdays make up an essential part of life.
At 6:45 the alarm-clock wakes me up and my working day begins. Actually Im not fond of getting up early, but Im already used to it. I do my bed and go to the bathroom. There I brush my teeth and wash ones my face . At 7:30 oclock Im ready to have breakfast. Usually I have no time to cook my breakfast, so I just have a cup of tea and maybe a bowl of cereal. Sometimes I can oversleep and not have time to have breakfast
I leave home at 7:40. My college is away from house and it usually takes me 30 minutes to get there. My classes begin at 8.30 a.m. and finish at about 3 p.m. At 11.05 I usually go to our canteen and buy something to eat.
When my classes are finished I return home. Then I cook my dinner or warm it up. After hard work at college I feel like having a rest. After dinner I usually go out with my friends or go in for sports. In addition, I play computer games and shoot video games on my YouTube channel. I do not always play the same game. But usually I play Minecraft or in the shooter game Battle Carnival. Then I do my homework for the next school day. It takes me about 4 hours.
If I have 2 or 3 hours before going to sleep I watch TV series or video in YouTube, listen to the music, chat with some friends or help my mother to cook supper. When the supper is ready we gather in the dining room, eat and share the day news. After supper at about 11 oclock I am taking a bath and go to bed.