Проверить корректность (Описание фото по станд ЕГЭ)I have been taking photos

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I have been taking photos for a long time and this is my favourite one. This photo were taken few years ago in kitchen at my home.
Here I can see my happy father with brother. They are in special clothes for cooking. Dad carving the fish and teaching his son how to cook it.
My brother looking attentively and trying to memorize all that father do because he is wanting to become a great chef.
I keep this photo in my album because I love my brother and I want to save all our happy memories. I decided to show this picture to you because you never seen my family before and I wanted to share with you one photo from my collection. In conclusion I want to say that photo is a great way to save some moments of life and it is my favourite hobby now.