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1)I think that my favourite season is summer. Because we have 3 months weekend and it's awesome days that will never happen. Every summer some new invents and it's so cool and interesting. And plus I can use my free time however I want.
2) I feel some sad and listen some sad music because when it's raining outside it's like raining inside you soul and I can't translate it in words but something like that. But I can play on my guitar and it raises my spirits. I can read some interesting books for example: The hobbit, The lord of the rings and etc.
3) I usually try to spend my time with my parents but more with my friends. But it's not right we must spend all our time with our parents because in future you will never have this chance again and this moments will remember you your bright moments from these times. In my opinion friends in that age (teenage) you must try to be like an animal everywhere try to be with you parents. I said everything.