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Dear Maxim,

Our new house is just grate!I moved into a new house yesterday and I couldnt wait  to tell you about it.The house is in the best place you can imagine.My mother call it "our little heaven".its a large house with a front and back garden.From the fron we have a view of the beautifull beach and behind the house there is a young forest.It is much nicer than our past flatn in town an my new bedroom is much cooler than my old one.I hope you can come and visit me next week.Write back soon and tell me about your house.

Your Sasha

Dear Sasha,

Im glad to hear that you like your new home.That sounds much cooler than your old one.As for me, I live in the  large house in town.Our house is larger than most houses there;in fact we have four storeys.From our house you can see a lot of block of flats so the view is not as beatifull as it is from your house.Im also pretty sure that it is much noiser than where you live.We are very lucky though, because my parents also own a little bungalow near the forest where we go on weekend.I think it would be a gret idea for you to come with us next month.What do you think?

Maxim.