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Dear Mary,
Thank you for your letter. It was very interesting.
Ussually, I have some bread with chocolate. I like having breakfast in the morning. My mum always cooks it for me. I love herdefinitely, she cooked it for me yesterday, too.
Do you like dogs?
What dog is your favourite?
What dogs do you hate?
Best wishes
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Hi Merry!
How are you? I'm very good:) thanks for you message, I couldn't wrote you because i had some problems at school. At breakfast I usually have cereals with tea. I have breakfast about 8:00 am.
Yesterday I cooked breakfast myself.
And what do you usually eat for breakfast? And who cook it for you?
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