Сочинение на тему "My room". Пожалуйста!! Буду очень признательна.

Неважно какая комната?

Да

My room is small, but it is very cozy and bright. My room belongs only to me and no one shares it with me. In addition, my room is the most distant from the other rooms in my house and no one can eavesdrop on me.
Моя комната малюсенькая, но очень комфортная и светлая. Моя комната принадлежит только мне и никто не разделяет её со мной. К тому же, моя комната самая отдалённая из всех комнат в моём доме и никто не может подслушивать меня.
Можешь что-то убрать либо добаавить

My RoomМоя комнатаWe live in a three-room flat. The first room is my parents bedroom, the second is a hall for guests, and the third is my bedroom. My favourite room is, of course, my bedroom. I spend most of my time there as its not only a bedroom but also a study. My room is very nice and cozy. I cant say its spacious enough but I have everything I need there. There isnt much furniture, only necessary things. For more convenience its built-in. My bed is situated in the left corner of the room, and my desk is in the right. Beside my bed there is a stylish lamp and a comfortable armchair with some stuffed animals on it. When its rainy weather outside, I like to turn on my lamp, sit in the armchair and read interesting books. As for the desk, it contains numerous drawers where I can keep my pens, pencils, markers, text-books, exercise books, notes, diaries and else. There are also some shelves with books in my room. I have a large collection of Russian and English books. There are some posters with my favourite quotations and music bands on the walls. They set a special atmosphere in my room. I like my room a lot. Its the place where I feel fine. When my friends come over, I invite them into my room. Its a suitable place both for work and for rest.