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1)Well, I spent my holidays in aboard. I was in Maldives and enjoyed my time. The water is really clean that I was fascinatedand there was modern buildings too. 
Emm..  The food was good but I cant say that It is the best in the world. I prefer Japanese,Italian,French and Uzbek food. But the most I was shocked that It is very small country but the nature and atmosphere shocked me.Next time I want to spend it in Brooklyn,Australia
2)Usually at first I woke up at about 8-9am and started to sightseeing
3)In my free time I just lied on my bed in hotel and sat online because there was free wi-fi.
4) Its not bad but its really hot but many funs
5)One thing which I wanted to be more and more is Blue lagoon in Ocean.

1) I spent my holidays in the city.
2) I usually woke up at 9-10 a.m
3) I usually played computer games and go for a walk.
4) The weather was sunny and warm.
5) I didn't visit any interistin places this summer.