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I think it is so cruel that people keep animals in cages at the zoo.Was it pleasure for you to be in this situation for example as hare's role!?you need to be free and different animals too...freedom is a big wonder!but in the zoo also people have ill or rair animals.people care of them.it is a big plus.But reserves are better.zooes мейд for publik and money.i don't like visit zooes.because many animals in it are don't happy.....как то так