Задали в шк сочинение по британскому на тему My typical day.Проверьте

Задали в шк сочинение по британскому на тему My typical day.
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My typical day.
Today, I want to tell you about my typical day. Actually, my life isn't very active and amazing, but I'll try tell you something interesting.
I get up often at half past six, but sometimes, when I want to sleep a little longer, I get up at seven o'clock. In the morning I have a breakfast, make the bed, do my hair, and after that, I go out of my house and go to school.
At school, I'm as usual bored, because I have no time to communicate with my friends and a (либо the подскажите предлго) breaks between lessons are very short.
After school, almost always I have music or English classes. It's interesting and useful for me. I really enjoy it.
After classes I go home. When I come home, I often feel exhausted and very hungry. Typically I have dinner, and then I get started to do my homework. Then, I can't think about something other than sleep.
The my essay ending, because now, I'm going to sleep.

The end.