Read Andreas letter of application for the position advertised in Ex.
Read Andreas letter of application for the position advertised in Ex. 6a on p. 55. Is it appropriate? Why (not)? Give reasons.
Dear Mr Willis,
I am writing to apply for the position of Part-Time Sales Assistant which I saw in the newspaper I bought while I was walking my dog, Pedro, yesterday.
I am 16 years old, I am tall and I have got long brown curly hair. I have got one sister, who I get on with very well. Although I dont have any experience of working in a shop, I want to work for you, I have had a regular baby-sitting job for a year now. I am trustworthy and reliable, but I can sometimes be a little impatient and moody.
Im free to start work from July. I finish my exams at the end of May so I can V wait to hear from you.
Yours sincerely, A. Lezry Andrea Leary
It does not use formal linkers/phrases.
It includes irrelevant information, i.e. about her pets, her family, her appearance, her summer plans.
It includes negative things about her personality
It doesnt include information about: her qualifications, her positive qualities, the languages she speaks, or what she is studying.
It doesnt mention when the applicant is available for interview.
It doesnt mention a CV.
Перевод:
Это заявление на работу не подходит по последующим причинам:
Оно не употребляет формальные линкеры/фразы.
Оно включает в себя негодную информацию о ее семейных животных, ее семье, ее наружном виде, ее планах на лето.
Оно включает в себя нехорошие вещи о ее личности
Оно не включает информацию о: ее квалификации, ее положительных качествах, языках, на которых она говорит, либо том, что она изучает.
В нем не упоминается, когда заявитель доступен для интервью.
Оно не упоминает резюме.
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