Сочинение "Music in our life"

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I love music, i think people cannot live without it. The first thing i do in the morning I switch on my tape-recorder. 
We can can hear music everywhere; in the streets, in the shops, on TV, over the radio, in the cars, in the parks, everywhere. I think it is really doesnt matter what kind of music you prefer; rock, pop, classical, jazz. A lot of people are fond of music.  They buy tapes, go to the concerts, visit Concerts Halls and Opera Theatres.
I enjoy listening music because it reflects my moods and emotions.
Sometimes i attend music halls and the concerts, when popular groups and singers are there. I like watching music programs on TV. I like to know more and more about popular talented groups and singers i like.
Some people go to musics schools, they play different musical instruments, sing in the chorus, try to compose music. 

I love music, I think people can not live without it. The first thing I do in the morning I switch on my tape recorder. We can hear music everywhere: in the streets, in the shops, on TV, over the radio, in the cars, in the parks, everywhere. I think it's really doesn't matter what kind of music you prefer: rock, pop, classical, jazz. A lot of people are fond of music. They buy tapes, go to the concerts, visit Concert Halls and Opera Theatres. Sometimes I attend music halls and the concerts, when popular groups and singers are there. I like watching music programs on TV. I like to know more and more about popular talented groups and singers I like. Unfortunately there are so many ungifted singers on the stages, that it makes me sad. To have a good producer doesn't mean to have good ears and voice. I think that only talented people can claim to be singers.