Написал сочинение по англ. проверьте пожалуйста и исправьте. Мне произнесли тип
Написал сочинение по англ. проверьте пожалуйста и исправьте. Мне произнесли тип времена не верно стоят. Ну и много в общем ошибок.
Classmates, we agreed to go to the theatre. This was my first visit to the theatre. Had to go away, so I left early in the morning. On the way I thought looks like the theater building , what he is inside. When we were at the threshold of the theater, I saw that he was much prettier than I had imagined. Then we went inside, inside he was just amazing, the interior struck me. After some time the show started. They put me in a joyful mood , i am so involved in the action that i forget that i am watching a play. This view teaches us to find your way in life. it performance makes you laugh and happy. After the first trip to the theater I can say that I liked the theatre.
размышляю так будет лучше
! лучше on MY way, а не on THE way
! ...i thought how did the theatre look like and what was it in the inside
! ...IT was much prettier
! превосходнее напиши IT was amazing there, when we went inside
! the show HAD started
! they HAD put me
! i was so...
! i forgot...
! ...to find your OWN PLACE in life
! itS performance, а вообще лучше THE performance
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