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Choosing a career
After school you realize that the time to choose one job out of the hundreds has come. It's going to be a hard choice and nobody can make it for you.
Before you can choose, you ask yourself quite a lot of questions. What's really important to you? What turns you on? What do you like to do?These questions are designed to help you get at one of the key elements in career choice: values. Begin your career search by sorting out your values and writing them down as clearly and succinctly as you can.
It's difficult to know all the answers to these questions until you have left school and actually begun work.Experiment wiil help you.There's no substitute for experience, the more the better. It's probably safe to say that nearly every career looks vastly different from the outside than from within. If you're new to the job market or if you are considering a career change, get out and talk to people who are actually doing it.
Many young people consider teaching as a career.Those of us who spend our days in schools know how rewarding the job is. At the same time it is not easy and a real challenge to your character, abilities and talent.If you like people, you will love teaching.
Identify your skills and talents.A skill is something you've learned to do. A talent is something you've been born with.You may be skilled at something and still not find it interesting. Chances are, however, if you are naturally talented at something, there will be a correspondence between that particular talent and your values. Put another way: you are more apt to enjoy doing what you do well naturally than what you have simply been taught to do.
Identify your preferences. From early on, we approach the world with certain personal preferences--how we perceive others, how we think and make decisions, whether we prefer concepts over people or vice versa, and the extent to which we are comfortable with uncertainty in our lives. For many, these preferences operate at a subconscious level, but they strongly influence the way we function with others.
In your first job, opt for experience first, money second. If you're at the top of your class graduating summa cum laude, you may be able to combine both in a single package, but for most new entrants into the workforce, it's a matter of priorities. A good way of sizing up several opportunities is to ask yourself: "Which position will offer me the best chance of becoming excellent at what I do?" And that may not be the one that pays the highest initial salary. The career choice is the one of the most importaint in you life.So I wish you all the luck in the world.