Переведите пожалуйста на английскийЯ пыталась...Работа вышла грязной,так как 1-ый раз

Я бы так сделал: I tried The work was done shoddily because it was the first time I had used crayons. I know that I cant draw hair well and it turned out less fluffy than I had intended it to be.

I tried ... The work turned out to be dirty, because for the first time I worked with pastel pencils. I know that I draw my hair badly and they turned out less, so to speak airy, than I wanted

Я пробовала...Работа вышла грязной,так как 1-ый раз работала пастельными карандашами. Я знаю,что плохо живописую волосы и они вышли наименее,так сказать воздушными,чем я желала

I tried ... The work turned out to be dirty, because for the first time I worked with pastel pencils. I know that I draw my hair badly and they turned out less, so to speak airy, than I wanted