Проверьте, пожалуйста, текст! Те, кто просто напишут, что всё верно получат
Проверьте, пожалуйста, текст! Те, кто просто напишут, что всё правильно получат удалённый ответ. Запятые тоже надобно проверить. Чем можно поменять слово so?
Hello, Mr. Brown! My name is Eugene and Im 9th grade student. I like traveling and doing some sports, so your summer camp is interesting for me.
In this summer I have a lot of time, so I can stay for 3 weeks from the beginning of July. For my opinion, at this time the weather is the best, but thats very important for outdoor activities.
I would choose adventure workshop, because I tried diving last year and really liked it. Also I have experience in film making, so film academy workshop would be interesting for me. I could help another children and learn something new.
Best regards,
Eugene.
Hello, Mr. Brown!
My name is Eugene and Im a 9th grader. I enjoy traveling and playing several sports, because of that I am interested in your summer camp.
This summer Ill have lots of time on hand, and would like to participate for 3 weeks starting early July. In my opinion, thats when the weather is best, which its highly important for outdoor activities.
I would love to do the adventure workshop, Ive tried diving last year and really liked it. Also I have some experience in film making, so the film academy workshop sounds quite interesting. I look forward to helping other campers and learning new things .
Best regards,
Eugene.
Итак, начнём!
1 .so можно заменить that's why-вот почему (перевод)
2 надобно поправить:
-I'm the 9th grade student.
-travelling
-This summer I'll have a lot of time.....
-....I can stay(здесь надобно написать где ты желаешь остановиться, предложение незаконченное).............
-In my opinion.......
-не надобно писать at this time.......просто This time.......
-Also I have an experience......
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